This post is just answering to some of your comments.
To Bookworm-- as you probably already have figured out, they will be on a mission to stop Asher Alexander on breaking the watertowers. (Alexander thinks that exploding water towers will help water grass.)
To Elizabeth-- well, the 'parts' aren't chapters, really. So I just post whatever I've written so far. Yeah, all of you should know that. Just making sure you know that I'm not choosing chapters yet. And if you guys have any suggestions, then just comment and tell me where. :) Thanks!
Also to Elizabeth-- yes... Antonio's cologne. I will go fix that. (It's supposed to be Anthony's cologne.)
More for Elizabeth-- They aren't really going through training. It's just so that Alexander can tell them his plan and make sure they'll know how to carry it out.
Well i have one thought you dhould put something in like on how to tell them apart like a big secret just them 2 or three know like a freckle or something then at soe point the bad guy notices so them you have a lot more to write about like them makeing excuzes like its marker or something a scar would be good to haha with a story to tell with it
ReplyDeleteOoooh... okay. Gotacha! :) I haven't really been reading much... But.. time to ketchup!
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